My Busy Weekend_650字

i was vevy very busy and very very tired every weekend.i can't rest well in the day.i wanted play comp-uter at home!but i can't······ why？this is a easy question. in the morning,i must get up early.so i was tired.my friends all are bored every weekend,but i'm not.imust do many things,i had two art classes in heishan.my mom went there drive car with me.it is not f-ar. at noon,i only ate a little food,because i didn't have many times.i had a piano lesson at twelve o'clock. in the afternoon,i'm very tired now,but i still went to my english school,i had two english classes,too. in the evening,i must do my homework.i can't play computer games,i'm sad. what a busy weekend!

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i am always very busy and tired every weekend. i can't have a good rest. i want to play computer at home! but i can't. i have got lots of things to do. in the morning, i must get up early. i have two art classes in heishan. my mom drives me there. it is not far. at noon, i only eat a little food, because i don't have much time. i have a piano lesson at twelve o'clock. in the afternoon, i still have two english classes. in the evening, i must do my homework. i am so tired and sad. what a busy weekend i have!

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