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更新1:choytinching:错??我以希望英文有进步﹐会考能合格的这个目标有什么问题?请你给我一个合理的解释﹐让我改一改我的错误﹐否则我今晚可能会检举你!!!

1whichareasdoyoutainkyouhaveperformedwelllastyear?我去年在数学科方面表现得比较好。Ithinkmymaths(youcanchangeiteg.chineseorenglishe)haveperformedwelllastyear.2whichareasdoyouthinkyoushouldgetimprovementthisyear?我以往英文都比较差﹐所以希望今年的英文成绩有所进步﹐而其他的科目也有很大进步的空间。IshouldgetimprovementinEnglishthisyearBecaseinthelastfewyearsmyEnglishisworst!Andtheotherssubjectisquitewellandalsohavetoimprovemore.3whatareyourgoalsthisyear?我希望我的英文有所进步﹐会考能够合格。IgoalsmyEnlishspeakingandtheGrammeruseingwillhaveimprvedAlsointheHKCEEwillpreformwellandwellresult4whatwillyoudotoachieveyourgoals?我会多聆听﹑多阅读﹑多写作﹑﹑多说话英文科的东西﹐遇到不明白的地方也多向别人发问。Iwilllistentotheothersdomoreextraexericesspeaktotheclas***atesorteacherinEnglishifIseesomedonotunderstandialsowillasktheotherpeopleIfyoudonotknowsomeorwhatyoucanaskme!!IamveryweleHopeyouwilllikemywerandcanhelpyou参考:myself1whichareasdoyoutainkyouhaveperformedwelllastyear?我去年在数学科方面表现得比较好。Ibehavedbetterincountingdisciplinelastyear.2whichareasdoyouthinkyoushouldgetimprovementthisyear?我以往英文都比较差﹐所以希望今年的英文成绩有所进步﹐而其他的科目也有很大进步的空间。MypastEnglishispoorersohopetheEnglishachievementofthisyearprogressestosomeextentandothersubjectsSpacemakingverylargeprogresstoo.3whatareyourgoalsthisyear?我希望我的英文有所进步﹐会考能够合格。IhopemyEnglishprogressestosomeextentthenationwideexaminationforgraduationqualificationcanbequalified.4whatwillyoudotoachieveyourgoals?我会多聆听﹑多阅读﹑多写作﹑﹑多说话英文科的东西﹐遇到不明白的地方也多向别人发问。IwilllistentomorereadmanywritingspeakmoreEnglishthingsofdepartmentmorecan'tmeettheplacetounderstandmoremoretooAsktoothers.参考:me1whichareasdoyoutainkyouhaveperformedwelllastyear?Ibehavedbetterincountingdisciplinelastyear.2whichareasdoyouthinkyoushouldgetimprovementthisyear?MypastEnglishispoorersohopethattheEnglishachievementofthisyearprogressestosomeextentandothersubjectsThereisverybigandprogressivespacetoo.3whatareyourgoalsthisyear?IhopethatmyEnglishprogressestosomeextentthenationwideexaminationforgraduationqualificationcanbequalified.4whatwillyoudotoachieveyourgoals?IwilllistentothingsoftheEnglishdepartmentmorereadmanywritingmorespeakcan'tmeettheplacetounderstandmoremoretooAsktoothers.3.今年什么是你的目标?错:我希望我的英文有所进步﹐会考能够合格。Q1.whichareasdoyoutainkyouhaveperformedwelllastyear?Ans1:Mydisplayedlastyearinthemathematicalsciencesectquitewell.Q2.whichareasdoyouthinkyoushouldgetimprovementthisyear?Ans2:MyformerEnglishisquitebad﹐thereforeIhopethisyearmyEnglish’sresulthasprogresses﹐alosothersubjects.Q3.whatareyourgoalsthisyear?Ans3:IhopedmyEnglishhasprogresses﹐thearea-widestudentexaminationtobeablequalified.Q4.whatwillyoudotoachieveyourgoals?Ans4:Icanlistenrespectfully﹑themulti-reading﹑multi-writing﹑﹑multi-speechinEnglishDepartment'sthing﹐tomeetnottheclearplacetobealsomanytoaskaquestiontoothers.1.Iexpressedinmathematicssectionlastyearbetter.2.IformerEnglishisallworsesohopetheEnglishresultofthisyearhasaprogressandothersubjectsalsohaveverygreatlyprogressivespace.3.IhopemyEnglishhasaprogressmeeting'stestingcanbequalified.4.IwilllistenmuchreadmuchwritemuchtalkthethingofEnglishsectionmoretheplacewhichmeetsnottounderstandisalsomanyAskquestiontowardtheotherpeople.参考:自己.