写得演讲稿。。。求帮忙修改

Iam[much]honored[tobeasked改为asinvited]tospeakattheclosingceremony[fromthe改为of]oneofthefinestuniversities[of改为in]Korea.SofarIhavebeeninKoreaforfifteendaysasanexchangestudent.AlthoughtheexchangewasveryshortIstill[learned]alotfrom[lifeaboard改为it].SoI’dliketothankyouforcontributingsomuchtothepleasureofourstayinKorea.

Before[Icame改为coming]toKoreaIhaveheardofKyungHeeUniversityasaworld-famouscomprehensive,researchuniversity.WhenI[删除really]cometoKyungHeebyperson,[删除jointhecampus]Idiscoveredmoreabout[him改为it].InKyungHeeUniversity,[teachers改为professorsare]quitededicatedto[his改为their]studentwhilestudentsshare[therightsequallylikemasters改为equalrightastheprofessors].Theuniversity’smotto[is]“DemocratizationofSchool,ideasandliving”[,asitsaid,删除].Ifoundanoutstanding[campusmakeupofculturedprofessorsandresponsiblestudents改为universityismadebylearnedprofessorsandhard-workingstudents].KyungHeeisalsoa[universitywithbeautifulenvironment改为beautifuluniversity]withneatstreetand[unbelievable删除]freshair[relaxeveryoneincampus删除].WhenI[takea删除]walkin[the]campusI[evenhaveavisionthat改为feelasif]Iamwalkinginagarden.[Unfortunately改为It’saregretthat]wecomeinthewinter,[Ibelievethat]KyungHee[will改为must]bemuchmorebeautifulinspring,[right改为isn’tit]?

Inthepastfifteendays,welivedandstudiedtogether[withyou].Wevisited[other]universities,practicedinhospitals,learnedadvancedmedicalinstrumentsandsoon.Althoughthestudytaskwas[exceedingheavy改为extremelytough],weenjoyedthetimewithourexcellentprofessors.Thanksfortheselflessnessteachingofalltheprofessors,webroadenedourhorizonsandlearnedalot.Besides[thegainsin]study,duringtheperiod,Iwasalsodeeply[infected改为moved]bytheacademicatmosphereandKoreanprofessionalism.SoonafterIstartworkwithKoreansatschoolhospitalIfindKoreans’workattitudeisso[hash改为harsh?]that[beyondmyimagination改为Ican’timagine].Iwasdeeplyshocked.Tobehonest,[the]professionalismofKoreanandthespiritofselflessnessinspiredmewithrespect.

The[effect改为result或outcome]oftheexchange[is删除]seemstobefarbeyondourimagination.We[benefited]alotfromthisvaluableexperience,notonlyinknowledgebutalsoinspirit.FinallythankyouKyungHeeUniversity!Thankyoumyprofessorsandclassmates!

IammuchhonoredasinvitedtospeakattheclosingceremonyofoneofthefinestuniversitiesinKorea.SofarIhavebeeninKoreaforfifteendaysasanexchangestudent.AlthoughtheexchangewasveryshortIstilllearnedalotfromit.SoI’dliketothankyouforcontributingsomuchtothepleasureofourstayinKorea.

BeforecomingtoKoreaIhaveheardofKyungHeeUniversityasaworld-famouscomprehensive,researchuniversity.WhenIcometoKyungHeebyperson,Idiscoveredmoreaboutit.InKyungHeeUniversity,professorsarequitededicatedtotheirstudentwhilestudentsshareequalrightastheprofessors.Theuniversity’smottois“DemocratizationofSchool,ideasandliving”.Ifoundanoutstandinguniversityismadebylearnedprofessorsandhard-workingstudents.KyungHeeisalsoabeautifuluniversitywithneatstreetandfreshair.WhenIwalkinthecampusIfeelasifIamwalkinginagarden.It’saregretthatwecomeinthewinter,IbelievethatKyungHeemustbemuchmorebeautifulinspring,isn’tit?

Inthepastfifteendays,welivedandstudiedtogetherwithyou.Wevisitedotheruniversities,practicedinhospitals,learnedadvancedmedicalinstrumentsandsoon.Althoughthestudytaskwasextremelytough,weenjoyedthetimewithourexcellentprofessors.Thanksfortheselflessnessteachingofalltheprofessors,webroadenedourhorizonsandlearnedalot.Besidesthegainsinstudy,duringtheperiod,IwasalsodeeplymovedbytheacademicatmosphereandKoreanprofessionalism.SoonafterIstartworkwithKoreansatschoolhospitalIfindKoreans’workattitudeissoharshthatIcan’timagine.Iwasdeeplyshocked.Tobehonest,theprofessionalismofKoreanandthespiritofselflessnessinspiredmewithrespect.

Theresult(或outcome)oftheexchangeseemstobefarbeyondourimagination.Webenefitedalotfromthisvaluableexperience,notonlyinknowledgebutalsoinspirit.FinallythankyouKyungHeeUniversity!Thankyoumyprofessorsandclassmates!