英文作文关于hobby

CORRECTION~~好有问题==Whatisyourfavouritehobby?Ifyoudon’thaveanyhobbies

yourlifewillnotbecontent.WhenIwastenyears’old

mygrandmothertoldmeabouttheimportanceofhobby

shealwayssaidthatthehobbycould1.broandenourhorizonandenrichourstudyingschoollife.2.BecauseofherwordsandencouragementsIamthestudentofQueenMaudSecondarySchool

whichisapopularandtremendousinstituteinHongKongnowadays.However

whenI3.camebacktohome

mygrandmother’sbreathhavedisappearedintheair.4.Althoughthewillingofmygrandmahavenotbeenstatisfied

ithinkshewould5.likedourfamilycanbemoreharmonyandsolidarity.6.Andthemostimportantthingthatshebequeathedtomewasthewordsofemphasizingtheimportancesofthehobbies.Italwaysringsmybell.Fromthenon

ihopeicanhaveahobbysoiengageinthereadingclub

7.whichfurtherimprovesmyself-management.Itisextremelybeneficialtomyschoollife.Thisshowshobbyisakeywhichcanimproveourlifeandmakesusbe8.apoliteperson.dailylifecannotbeimproved==只会thequalityofdailylifecanbeimproved所以就改左做上面咁我知你系想讲因为你GRANDMA讲过HOBBY好紧要同埋系可以令到你IMPROVEYOURDAILYLIFE.而就系因为咁你先入到一间好中学.我觉得如果你唔DESCRIBE下间学校会点出面D人唔会知道你间学校系好定差.grammaticalmistake你GRANDMA死左系之前的事咩系Althoughmygrandmotherhaven'tneededanythingthatshewanted==完全唔知你讲咩无左WOULD好似好D我知你系想讲话你GRANDMA最影响到你的系叫你参加HOBBIES不过你咁样写唔系好顺咩系bringupagoodcharactertohelpbymyself.你系唔系想讲自我管理>?系SELF-MANAGEMENT同埋你之后讲的野都同SELF-MANAGEMENT无关系problemsofarticlebyWInG~~~2010-10-2819:13:56补充：SORRY上面唔应该系POINTFORM应该系须住1234567咁去

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