请高手帮忙批改作文，谢谢了！！！

Withtherapidexpansionofcityscale（size）andever-increasingdifference（s）betweenrurallifeandurbanlife,webegintofocusonwhichareasweprefertotakecareofourfamiliies（family）.（focuson某个问题、某个事件，衔接不当）Naturally,whetherweshouldsupportournuclearfamilyinruralregionsorinurbanregionshasbeenahighlydisputableissue.Frommyperspective,livingincity（cities）ismorebeneficialtoourfamilymembers.

Tobeginwith,urbanlifecanafford(afford主语常常是人吧，建议provide)usavarietyofleisure（？）facilitiesto（这句不对，to表目的？逻辑上错了）giveourfamilyawiderangeofchoicesforrecreation.Leisurefacilities,bydefinition,areplacesorfacilitiesthatcan【clamthenervesandrestorethesoul,expandouroutlook,】（3个都比较中式）enhanceourfamilybondswithourimmediatefamily,etc.Especially,thesefacilitiescanbenefittheelderlyandchildrenmost,whicharethecentersofeveryfamilytobecared.Suchlesiurefacilitiesaspubliclibrary,zoo,amusementparkandgallerywillmaintian（maintain）ourphysicalandpsychologicalsoundness.Onlyinurbanareascanwefindalargeamountsofthesefacilities.Incontrast,ruralregionscan'tmeetourtheseneeds.

弱弱说一句感觉是先想好中文再翻译过来的感觉，不地道。

大致看了一下，改了部分~

你是要考托福吧，建议你到小马过河和寄托两个论坛，在Toefl小组里，加入后把文章发上去就有人帮忙改了。~