托福综合写作范文
新托福写作考试中的综合写作部分是很多学生的难点之一。不妨多看看托福范文,那你知道托福综合写作范文有哪些吗?
托福综合写作范文篇一:药品广告【drugadvertisement】
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提出命题:药品广告所提供的信息都是客观全面的,且病人对药物了解得越多越好
1.病人可以更多了解处方药的相关信息【information】
2.医生开药时,病人可以与广告上进行比较,有利于选药
3.通过广告,病人可以了解到新药的发展,提醒医生
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挑战命题:病人不需要对药物了解太多,因为有时候了解得太多会对非专业的病人产生困扰,而且广告所提供的信息也不完整全面
1.广告通常只有宣传好处,对副作用【sideeffects】一笔带过,病人很难判断
2.病人对药物的准确用法用量不了解,可能会用错
3.广告只宣传新药,对旧药没有宣传,但是针对不同的病情,也许旧药更为合适【appropriate】
例文:Thespeakerraisesseriouscounterargumentsagainstthereadingparagraphsbyprovidingdrasticallydifferentevidencesregardingtheeffectsoftheadvertisement,theimpactofself-selectingmedication,andtheimpactoftrendsinthepharmaceutical制药的industry.
First,knowingmoreinformationfromtheadswillnotnecessarilyhelpthepatientsmakebetter-informeddecisions,asthereadingargues.Onthecontrary,patients,withoutprofessionaltrainingandknowledge,willbemoresusceptible易受影响的tomisunderstandinginformation.Forexample,theywouldfocusonlyonthepositivesidesofacertainmedicinewhileignoringtheserioussideeffects.
Inaddition,ifthepatientsbeartheresponsibilityofprescribing开药,吩咐用药theirownmedication,theyassumemoreresponsibilitytotheirownhealth.Thismakesdoctorslessliableforpotential潜在的risksandundesirableconsequences.
Lastly,asforthenewtrends'benefitstothepatients,thespeakerdoesnotchallengethereadingdirectly.Instead,hearguesthatthenewmedicine,whichwillcountformostoftheadsmaynotnecessarilybethebestmedicine,eventhoughthepatientscaninformtheirdoctorsaboutthenewproducts.
托福综合写作范文篇二:网络问卷【webbasedsurvey】
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网络问卷相对传统问卷的优势
1.调查范围更广,所以调查结果就更为准确【逻辑错误:参加人多并不代表范围广,也不能保证效果好】
2.发放,填写和收集问卷更加方便简单
3.成本低
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反驳网络问卷的优势
1.所取得的调查结果不全面【biased】,因为不是所有人都会上网,中老年人上网会比较少,而年轻人上网比较多
2.成本并不会低,因为一个好的网络问卷需要一个团队的大量工作【提出新的证据:网络问卷也需要成本和人力资源】
3.大多数人对网络问卷都不严肃,会得到不正确的信息,容易混淆视听。
例文:Thespeakerquestionstheeffectivenessofwebbasedsurveysbyprovidingevidencescontradictorytothereading.
First,heidentifiedthereading'slogicalflawinassumingthatanincreaseinthescopeandquantityofthesurveywillautomaticallytranslatetogreaterprecisionofthesurveys.However,ifsurveysaimtoquestionpeopleover60yearsold,howcantheseoldpeopleconductsurveysonlinesincethisgroupseldomsurftheInternet?Thewebsurveysareeffectiveinreachingmainlytheyounggeneration.Thustheresultscannotbeextendedtodemonstratetheviewsofthewholepopulation.
Second,althoughtheweb-basedsurveyswilllowerpapercost,theywillinevitablyincurnewcostsinwebdesigning,flashyfeatures,andotherelements,whichwillrequiremorecostlyteamwork.Thisevidenceeffectivelyattacksthereading'sargumentthatwebsurveyswillcertainlyreducethecostofthesurvey.
Intheend,manywebdesignerstendtooverdointhewebpageandaddfancyandflashyfeatures.Asaresult,manypeopleperceivetheweb-basedsurveysasnotseriousandarethusnotwillingtorespondtothesurveys.Unlikephysicalsurveysthatdrawattentioneffectively,manywebbasedsurveysaresimplyignoredorevendeleted.
托福综合写作范文篇三:加氟自来水【addingfluorideinpublicwater】
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在自来水中加氟的好处
1.防止蛀牙
2.杀死细菌
3.对骨骼有好处【decreasebonediseases】
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反驳
1.自来水并不会留在口中,对防止蛀牙没有帮助
2.氟会与输水管【waterpipe】中的化学物质反应,产生有毒物质,其危害大于细菌
3.过量的氟会使骨骼变脆
例文:Thespeakerrefutesthereading'sargumentaboutthebenefitsofaddingfluoridetopipewaterbyprovidingcontradictoryevidenceaboutpipewater'sfluoride'seffectivenessinpreventingcavitiesinteeth,killingbacteria,anddecreasingbonediseases.
First,thespeakerpointsoutthattheshortcontactoffluoridewithteethwillnotenablethefluoridetopreventcavities,asthereadingargues.Instead,thewaterwillpassthemouthandteethquicklyandgodirectlytothestomach.
Anotherargumentraisedinthelectureisthatfluoridecouldundergochemicalreactionswithheavymetalsinthepipe,suchaslead.Thiswillcreatetoxicsubstanceswhichwillposeserioushealththreat.Inthiswayfluoridecouldbeevenmoredeadlythanbacteria.Althoughthefluoride,asthereadingsays,willkillsomebacteria,thecurehereisworsethanthedisease.
Intheend,thespeakermaintainsthatoverdoseoffluoridewillbackfiretohumanbones.Althoughthereadingillustratesthatfluoridewillimprovebonestrength,thelecturesaysoverdosewillcauseseriousdamagetohumanbones.
托福综合写作范文篇四:关于恐龙是否是恒温动物
Theprofessoractuallycontradictsthestatementsmadeinthepassage.Sheisoftheviewthatdinosaursarenotendothermsi.e.theywerenotabletokeeptheirbodytemperatureataconstantrate.
Theprofessorcontradictstheissueofdinosaursbeingendothersbasedontheavailabilityoffossilsbeingavailableinthwepolarregions,shesaythatthepolarregionsinthosedayswerenotascoldastheyaretodayi.eatleastwarmenoughfordinosaurstolive.Durinharshwintersshesaysthatthereisapossibilityofthedinosaursactuallymigratingtowarmerregions.
Theissueoflegpositionandmovementbeingusedasareasontoclasifythedinosaursasendothermsdoesnotpleasetheprofessoreither.Shesaysthatdinosaurshadlegsundertheirbodiestosupporttheirhugebodiesi.ethelegsunderthebodyofthedinosaurwereactuallytosupportthehugeweightofthedinosaurandnottoprovideitwithabodystructurelikeendotherms【whichisactuallysuitedforrunning】.
Theprofessoracknowledgesthepresenceofhaversiancanalsbutalsopointsoutthatthatthefossilsshowthepresenceofgrowthrings.Theseringsoccurduetothethickeningofthebone.Thethickeningindicatesthatthedinosaurswere'ntactuallygrowingcontinuouslybutwereexperiencingperiodsofrapidgrowthandperiodsofnogrowthinsuccesion.Thispattern.shesaysischaracteristicofnonendothermicaanimals.
Thusitcanbeinferredthattheprofessorchallengesthepassagebygivingreasonsastowhyshethinksthatthedinosaurisnotanendotherm.
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