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撒哈拉沙漠：SaharaDesert

破旧不堪的塑胶桶:batteredplasticbottle

蚊虫：insects

传染疾病:epidemic

医疗设备:healthinstruments

水源地:watersupply

这个故事到底是你经历的还是听朋友说的？如果是朋友说的，后面陈述故事的时候将主语人称用he/she.

MyfriendtoldmeabouthisexperienceinSaharaDesertandiwastotallyshocked(movedwouldbebetterforpersonalemotionashappyness,greatitude,prase,etc.YoushouldbeSHOCKEDbythisstoryasitcouldneverhappeninchina).HereIamgoingtosharehisexperiencewithyou.

OnedaymyfriendwasdrivingsomewhereinSahara(areyoushureheisrunning?Idon'tcarefromwhereyouheardaboutthisstory,butIamsurenoonewouldberunninginSahara).Suddenlyhesawalittleboysittingalonewithonlyabatteredplasticbottlefilledwithlittledirtywater,andthetemperaturewas50celsiusdegree!Myfrindaskedtheboyandcametoknowthathewaswaitingforhisparentsfetchingwaterforhim,45milesaway,bywalking.ThatmeanshehadtowaitforatleastthreedaysinSaharawiththelittledirtywaterhehad.Withoutanymorethinking,myfriendgavehimthreelitersofdrinkablewaterandalighttochasethelonelinessandscare,aswellashisblessingstothislittleboy.

Youmayaskwhydon'ttheyjustlivenearthewater.Well,itisSahara.Epdemicsishauntingaroundthataerabytheinsects,flyingsandbugs.Nodoctors,nohealthinstruments,andnopills.Thatwhytheyprefertolivemilesawayfromwater.Forthatlittleboy,wedon'tknowifhesurvivedtillhisparentscameback,withonly3litersofwater.