急求英语高手帮忙修改一下我写的自我介绍,

Goodafternoon.

It'smygreatpleasuretohavethisopportunitytointroducemyselftoyouhere.

Mynameis***.Iwouldliketomakemyself-introductionwith3initiallettersfrommyname.

S,itstandsforstudy.Ithinklearningisafeelingofsatisfactionthroughwhichyoucangetsomeusefulknowledge.Myfavoritesubjectisbiology,becauseIthinkmostinterestingthingsaboutlivingthingscanbelearnedatthebiologyclass.Ialsowanttoworkinthisfieldinthefuture.Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit,right?

Second,letter“W”,itmeanswonderful.Ofcourse,mylifeisnotonlyfilledwithstudy,butalsowithwonderfulthingstoo.Afterfinishingmyhomework,Ispendmyfreetimelisteningtomusic,myfavoritesinger)isTaylorSwift.Whenlisteningtomusic,IfeellikeIamfloatinginthemusicworld.Don'tyouthinkit'swonderful?

Thelastone,Y,Yisyes.Iamapersonwhoiseasy-goingandfriendlyothers.Sowhensomeoneturnstome,Ialwayssayyestohelphimorher.Ithinkitnecessaryforeveryonetogetalongwellwithothers.

Ithinkit'sveryimportantIkeeponlearningandimprovingmyselfsothatIcankeeponmakingprogress.

Thankyouverymuch!

可以.,3,Ithinklearningisasatisfyfeelingwhichyoucangetsomeusefulknowledge一句改为Ithinklearningisasatisfiedfeeling，whichcan

bringyoupassionsofstudy.

And去掉

由于是你自己介绍，最好用主动语态，被动语态...,2,给点时间，我给你改改。

Goodafternoon,mydearteachers.It'sreallyagreatpleasuretobehere.Mynameis***.Now

letmeintroducemyelfwith3lettersfrommyname.

Firstly,S,itstandsforstu...,1,。。。。满怀***看到100分..改到一半还是不要了吧--建议你百度收个会比较快，根据自己的需要稍微做些变动。你这里面语法错误比较多，还有就是自我介绍稍微偏口语化一点，不要可以的讲究用词。个人给你的建议呵呵。

下面的都不错自己看结合下，根据口感自己多读几遍2分钟OK啦...,1,Goodafternoon,honorableteachersanddearfellowstudents.

It'smygreatpleasuretointroducemyselftoallofyouhere.Mynameis***.Nowletmeintroducemyelfwith3lettersfrommyname.

,1,【急】求英语高手帮忙修改一下我写的自我介绍,

Goodafternoon,mydearteachers.It'sreallyagreatpleasureformetointroducemyselftoyouhere.Mynameis***.Nowletmeintroducemyelfwith3letterswhicharefrommyname.

S,itstandsforstudy.Ithinklearningisasatisfyfeelingwhichyoucangetsomeusefulknowledge.Andmyfavoritesubjectisbiology.BecausemostinterestingthingsaboutlivingthingsIthinkinthisclasscanbelearned.ThenIalsowanttoworkonitinthefuture.Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit,right?

Second,theletter“W”,it'smeanswonderful.Ofcourse,mylifeisnotonlyfilledwithstudy,butwonderfulthingstodo.Afterfinishingmyhomework,Ispendmyfreetimelisteningtomusic,especiallyTaylorSwift's.Whenlisteningtomusic,IfeellikeIamfloatingupinthemusicalworld.Doyouthinkit'swonderful?

ThelastoneYisyes.Iamapersonwhoiseasy-goingtoothers.Sowhensomeoneturntome,I'llsayyestohelphimorher.AndIalsoconsiderthatit'snecessaryforeveryonetogetalongwellwithothers.

IthinkIstillneedtoimprovemyself.That'sall.Thanks.

还有你们觉得这些能在2分钟内说完吗?