一篇初三的英语作文，帮忙看看

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问题描述:

Nowweareyoungstudentandweshouldstudyhardtobeausefulpersoninthesociety.Ithinkweshouldlearneverysubjectwell,becausethebasicisveryimportantforus.Weshouldalsoexerciseeverydaysoastokeepourbodyhealthy.Don’tbelateforschoolandobeyalltherulesinschool----it’sgoodforustokeepgoodhabits.Andweshoulddothehomeworkeveryday.Tobepoliteandfriendlytootherpeopleisnecessaryforagoodstudent,too.Ithinkparentsshouldallowustodothethingsbyourselvesandweshouldn’tbeallowedtodrive,it’stoodangerous.Studyinghardandbeingfriendlytootherpeople,youwillbeasuccessfulmaninthefuture.

看看有没有什么语法错误，能改的话略微改动一些也可以。

谢谢了要快！20分钟内

解析:

Nowweareyoung（student，最好省去，要用也是复数。）andweshouldstudyhardtobe（bee更好）ausefulperson（inthesociety，最好用tosociety对社会有用的人。）.Ithinkweshouldlearneverysubjectwell,becausethebasicisveryimportantforus.Weshouldalsoexerciseeverydaysoastokeep（ourbody，用keephealthy就可以）healthy.Don’tbelateforschoolandobeyalltherulesinschool----it’sgoodforustokeepgoodhabits.Andweshoulddo（the省略）homeworkeveryday.Tobepoliteandfriendlytootherpeopleisnecessaryforagoodstudent,too.Ithinkparentsshouldallowustodothethingsbyourselvesandweshouldn’tbeallowedtodrive,（加because，或as等表示原因的，否则和前面的句子没有连词）it’stoodangerous.Studyinghardandbeingfriendlytootherpeople,youwillbeasuccessfulmaninthefuture.

初三的写的挺好！努力吧！