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帮忙修改下介绍地图的英语作文

发表时间：2024-07-10 01:45:16 来源：网友投稿

我大概帮你组织了一下语言然后比较简单的改了改，你看看，有问题可以给我留言。

Now,IwouldliketotalkaboutaMap.IamfromBaoDing.WhenIgotoschoolinTianjin,Ihavetotakebusbecausethereisnotrainbetweenthesetwocities.TogetTianjin,IshouldtaketheJin-Baohigh-speedbus,andgetoffthebusatChenChangstreet,walkalongChenChangstreetabout8KMandturnleft,thengoaheadonGuangRongroadandIwillfindtheschoolonright.

TheplacenexttoourschoolisXiGuparkandDingZiGubusstation.Sometimes,IgotoBinJiangstreetforshopping.Ioftengototherebysubway,becausetheHongHuLisubwaystationisjust500meterawayformourschool.IexitfromYingKouDaostationlater.

Ifyouwantbuysomefriedtwist(麻花吧，可以说breadtwist或者friedtwist)foryourparentsyoucangetoffthesubwayatNanLoustation.

LastweekItook（这里应该用过去式，因为是lastweek）NO.855busatDingZiGubusstationandgotoffattheBaLiTaistation,AndInoticed（这里用notice比较好）theTianJinandNanKaiuniversityarerightthere.

TianjingissobigthatIjusthavebeentofewplaces(fewplaces在这里指的是没几个地方)AndIwishIcantravelallaroundTianjin.

That’sall,thankyou!

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