英语作文求大神改进。。

ApersonwhomIhavealwayslookeduptoismyfather,anhonorableman.Hisversatilityanddevotiontohisfamilyhasmadeaprofoundimpressioninmymind.

Inreality,hehasavastarrayofhobbies.Forexample,heiscrazyaboutDIY,andthatskillsethasthecapabilitytoenrichourdailylifeandbroadenouroutlook.

Furthermore,heisalsoatalentedguitarist*owingtohismusicianship.Whenhewasyoung,hedreamtaboutbecominganeminentmusician.Ifheweretopersevere,perhapshisdreamwouldhavecametrueandhaveabrilliantfuture,yethegaveuphismusiccareerforhisfamily.

Inaddition,heissohandythathehastheabilitytorepairacar!

Besidesdevotingtimeintohisinterests,heworkshardforthefamilytoo.Myfatherisanoptimisticpersonandmaintainsapositiveattitudeeveryday.Nomatterwhathappens,hislifehasalackofworriesandheldanabundanceofjoy.

WheneverIfeeldepressedanddown,hewillbealwaysatmysideencouragingmetostriveharderandstronger.Heiswarm-heartedtohisassociatesandisalwaysreadytohelpthem.Hishonestyincreasedhischarm,andpeoplewholiveinmyneighborhoodlikesassociatingwithhim.

Furthermore,inordertotakecareofus,hehasmadealotofsacrificesforfamily,butheneverdidmentionawordonthis,becausehepossessesastrongsenseoffamilyresponsibility.

Myfatherismyrolemodel.Hehassetagoodexampleforme,whichisworthlearningallmylife.

*guiltiest-是内疚的意思，是guitarist,吉他手吗？