求几篇满分英语作文，可以适用于任何题目的

DearSir/Madame,

I’mwritingformoreinformationaboutthedaytourtoLondon.

AsastudentatOxfordUniversity,I’dliketoknowifyouhaveanyspecialpriceforstudents.Asforthemoneyyoucharge,doesitcovertheentrancefeesforvisitingtheplaceslisted?Whataboutlunch?Isitincluded?OrdoIneedtobringalongmyownfood?

Howlongwillthetourlast?SinceIneedtopreparemylessonsforthenextday,I’dliketoknowthetimetoreturn.Besides,isthereanytimeforshopping?IreallywanttohavealookatthebigstoresinLondon.

Yours,

LiHua

本文是根据画面的提示来写一封电子邮件。作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要点，叙述较为完整;其次作者运用一些过渡句和衔接词将文章串联，意思连贯。文章中采用了第一人称和一般现在时，这是值得肯定的地方。

DearAmy,

I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchoolofChina.I’msorrytohearthatyougotthelungcancerwhichbroughtyougreatpain.Butyoushouldrealizethatyouareyoungandhaveapromisinggreatfuture.So,standupandfightagainstthedisease!I’msureyouwillwin.ItisreportedthattheAmericaanti-cancerassociationwilldonatethreecentsuponeverycomfortletteryoureceive.SoIwilltellyoursituationtoallmyfriendsandaskthemtowritetoyou.Inthatway,youwillgetenoughmoneyforyoutobecured.Hopeyoucanbewellsoon.

Yours,

　　LiHua

本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如I?msorrytohearthat...,Itisreportedthat...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自但是通顺，值得学习。