怎么改英语作文

　　想要体高英语作文写作水平在原有的基础上进行修改提升是非常有效的办法，下面我就跟你们分享下怎么修改英语作文　　一、英语作文的等级　　四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分　　三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分　　二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得6-8分　　一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得9-10分　　二、英语作文修改案例　　案例一：　　ATriptotheZoo　　原稿：　　YesterdaywaySundayanditwasafineday.SoItakeatriptothezoo.Iwenttherebybus,Igetthereat8:00am.Therearemanypeople.andsomepeoplewatchedthetigers,somewatchedthemonkeys,Otherswatchedthebids,IsawmanyanimalsandItoolmanyphtos.Thatsainterestingtrip.Illneverforgetit.Thatsmytrip.　　修改后：　　ItwasasunnySundayAfteraquickbreakfast,Icouldntwaittogetonthebus.Thisismyfirsttimetoenjoyatripalone.Varionslovebalanimalsarewaitinginthezoo!　　AssoonasIgotthere,Iwasattractedatonce.Monkeyswereclimbinginthetreehappily.Sometimestheyevencametofetchthebananasinvisitorshands.Hownaughtytheywere!Whatsmore,Iwasalsointerstedinthetigers.Theyarecalledthekingofanimals,butatthismomenttheywerelyingquetly,maybetheyweresleepy.Animals,humanbeings,weliveinaworld.wearefamily.Itcametomymindimmiediatly.　　Anyway,Ihadaninterestingtriptoday.Itgavemeadeepimpression,Illneverforgetit.　　案例二：　　Myfavouriteseason　　原稿：　　Therearefourseasonsinayear.Andmyfavouriteseasonissummer.Althoughitsveryhot.Istillloveit.BecauseIcanswiminthesea.Andlieinsun.Thatsverycomfortable.AndIalsocaneatsomeIcecreams.theyaredelicioussothererelotsofthingdtodoinsummer.Thatsveryintersting.SoIlovesummer.Thatsmyfavouriteseason.　　修改后　　Myfavouriteseason　　Asisallknow,therearefourseasons.Speakingofmyfavourite,summercomesfirstalthoughitishot.　　Manythingscanbedoneinsummersuchasswimminginthesea,LyingonthebeachHowcomfortable!MoreimportantlyIcaneatdeliciousIcecream.Ofcourse,wealsoenjoybeautifulviewsoutside.AndImalwayslookingforwardtogoingfishingwithmyfather.　　Inaword,summerismyfavouriteseasonbecauseitbringsmealotofhappiness.　　三、英语作文修改的注意事项　　

1、 整篇文章逻辑的修改.作文的目的是为了表达东西,所以首先要确保作文表达的内容是清楚并且符合逻辑的,如果段落之间都是矛盾的就说不过去了.　　

2、 语法的修改篇章与段落的修改过后看句子的结构,说仔细了就是语法的修改.　　

3、 还有就是单词拼写等小细节的修改了.