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NoSweetwithoutSweat

Nosweetwithoutsweatisanoldsayingwhichwasconeludedbyancientpeoplefromtheirdailyexperiences.

Inancienttimes,somepeasantstransplantedriceseedlings,gatheredinwheatandspreadmanureintheshiningsun,inthepouringrainandinthefiercewind.Sweatwetthroughtheirclothesanddroppedfromtheirforehead.Theysteppedoutoftheirhometothefieldcarryingonahoeontheirshoulderswiththemoonoverheadgivingoffdimlightandwenthomewiththeirexhaustedbodieswhenthesunsetdaybyday.Whenautumn,theharvestseasoncame,smilesappearedontheirblackandwrinklyfaceswhichwerecausedbythestrongsunshineandhardworkwhilegazingatthelargefieldsofripecropsswayinginthebreeze.Howfine!Incontrast,otherpeasantswholayintheirhouseswithcomfortescapingthepoorweatherconditionsoutsideonlytofindnothingintheirstorehouseswhilethosehardworkingpeasants'storehouseswerefilledwithgoldenwheatandothergrain.Then,theylearnedthemeaningofthesayingNosweetwithoutsweat.Itmaybetheoriginoftheproverb.

Buttheproverbisalsotrueinmoderntimes.Withtherollingwheelofthehistoryithasbeenprovedthatthesayingcanalsobeappliedtomanyaspectsofsocialmattersinanytimesofthehistory.Withoutconstantpractice,howcanonebecomeaplanistandwintherespectandpraisefromallovertheworld?Withouthardtraining,howcananathletewinthegoldmedalintheinternationalgameswherecruelcompetitionsexitallthetime?Withoutsweatpaidoff,howcanyouclimbupthetopofthemountainandlookovertheboundlessbeautifulscene?

HaveyoulearnedthesayingbyEdisonthat1%geniusplus99%hardworkmakesuccess?MaybeyouarebornwithgeniusjustlikeMozart,butwithoutsweatyoualsocannotgetsweet.ItisundoubtedthatMozarthadtheamazinggeniusofcomposing.Asamatteroffact,whatwerereallyhandeddownwerenotwhathewrotebymeansofhisgeniusbutbyhishugeamountofeffort.Whenyoulistentohisgreatartworks,youwillbedeeplymoved.It'sbesttohavegeniusatbirthwhileit'sworsttorelyonitentirelyandpaynoeffort.

Evenifyouareconsideredlessintelligentthanothers,youcanobtainsweetthroughsweataswell.TakeEdisonasanexample.Oncehewasconsideredlittlemindandhadlittleeducationbutatlasthebecametheinventorofthelampwhichgreatlyimprovedcivilizationofhumanbeings.Hehadtodoseveralthousandofexperimentsinordertofindoutasuitablemetalwhichwasresistanttohightemperaturesandoxidationforthesakeofmakingalampwhichcouldbelongused.Hesucceededwithhislargeamountofsweat.Ifhehadgivenuphalfwayandifhehadgrudgedhissweat,hewouldonlyhavebeenamediocreperson.

Inasuccess,geniuscan'treplacesweat.Sweetmostlycomesfromsweatratherthangenius.ThesayingNosweatnosweetwillbethepermanentgoldenproverbofhumanbeings.

简评

本文题目为“没有汗水就没有甜美”(Nosweetwithoutsweat)。这是一个古谚，简洁易懂。作者围绕此主题，从古今中外各方面进行了分析。首先他描述了古代农民耕种的两种结果：辛勤耕耘、挥汗如雨则仓康充实；不舍得流汗、不愿劳动则颗粒无收。描写生动让人体会深刻。作者认为这同样适用于现代。钢琴家、运动员、登山者要成功必须付出汗水。作者还举了两个不同的成功事例：爱迪生、莫扎特。他们虽一个天资聪颖，一个生来鲁钝，但功事例：爱迪生、莫扎特。他们虽一个天资聪颖，一个生来鲁钝，但其成功都基于共同的原因：后天的勤奋。这验证了爱迪生的名言：成功是99％的汗水加l％的天才。作者用一句话对此做了精辟的总结：生具天分当然最好，但最糟的是：完全依赖天分而不付出劳动。通过以上有理有据的分析，作者成功地总结出：成功的甜美主要来自于辛勤的汗水，而非天分。

作者驾驭语言的能力较强，句子结构多样比，有力地表明了观点，是一篇佳文。