写作文一些地道的英语表达

1.地道英语作文表达亲，我尽力了呵

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Withthedevelopmentofmoderntechnology,***artphonesarepopularwithalmosteveryonearoundtheworldduetotheirexcellentfunctions.Almosteveryonehasa***artphone–whenIamtakingthebusorwaitinginline,Ialwaysseepeoplewiththeir***artphones.Yet,Itseemsthatpeopleusetheirphonesmainlytokilltimeratherthantomunicate.Evenworse,researchstudieshavefoundthatpeopletakeouttheirphonesevery6.5minutesonaverageandthisphenomenonisaptlynamed'***artphoneaddiction'.

Whyisthedrawto***artphonessopowerful?Personally,Ithinkthat***artphoneaddictionismainlyduetoourhabits.Nowadays,peoplecanknoweverythingthroughtheInterwithoutgoingout.Weenjoytheconvenience***artphonesofferus,butgraduallywefindthatwecan'tlivewithoutphonesanymore.Inaddition,withourfast-pacedmodernlife,wewouldratherfindthemostconvenientwayever.Howeverwemoreofteneataloneandwalkalonesowehavetousetheseaddhourstohavefunthroughdigitaldevices.Moreover,variousappsin***artphonessatisfiedtheconvenienceoflivingandprovidemeansofentertainment.

Whenpeoplespendtoomuchtimeonthephones,theygraduallylosetheabilitytomunicatewiththeirfriendsorparentsandthiswillweakenstheirinterpersonalskills.Asforteenagers,addictionto***artphonescannotonlycauseonetoneglectone'sstudy,butalsocausepsychologicalbarriersbeeenthemselvesandtheoutsideworldduetolackofgoodself-control.

2.英语基础写作,五句表达全部,地道的英语KnownastheoriginoftheancientMaritimeSilkRoadinChina,thecityofflowershasahistoryofover2,200years.Ithasapopulationofmorethan13,000,000andcovers7434.4squarekilometers.LocatinginthesouthofChina,itssoutheastbordersonHongKongandsouthbordersonMacao.Itisrichintouri***resources,suchastheGuangzhouEight.Manyforeignanddomestictouristsareattractedbyitsbeautifulscenery.

纯人工翻译哦。

3.【地道地英文表达这是我自己写的句子觉得好像怪怪的LZ几年级，写的哪种类型的作文？不同的状况可能在一些细节上需要不同的改动.问这种问题的时候，如果能说一下文章背景，或者想表到的中文意思，总体来说这句这么写有些累赘，有凑字数的感觉.如果不用特别正式的话就简短点，只要说Iwouldliketo***yzethecausesofthis[plicated?]problemandprovidepotentialsolutions.就足够了.-Inthefollowingessay这段如果你是演讲什么的要用也可以，但如果这句在essay内，最好避免这种写法.-Complicated这个词把句子单独拿出来感觉没有必要，但要连接上下文的话我不清楚，LZ自己看需不需要.-Fromdifferentaspects意思上没有错，但***yze本来就应该全面思考，再加这句修饰的话就有点啰嗦了.-词的改动来说possible没有错，但个人感觉potential听起来感觉会更好.-最后我个人比较喜欢用“thereasonsbehindthisproblem”来取代“thecausesofthisproblem”而显得稍微正式一点，但这样读者的理解可能有细微的变动，而我又不确定LZ写的到底是关于什么，就没有改这里.。

4.英语高考作文求一些地道的英语句式不要太过复杂一、常用句型：下文中出现的A,B，“。”

（某事物），***(somebody)，要在写作中要根据上下文进行适当替换.1、开头：Whenitesto。,somethink。

（说到……（某件事），有人认为，……）Thereisapublicdebatetodaythat。（现在有一个热点的话题就是，……）Aisamonwayof。

,butisitawiseone?(A是……的方法，但是这确实是一种明智的方法吗？)Recentalytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocus.2、提出观点：Nowthereisagrowingawarenessthat。Itistimeweexplorethetruthof。

Nowhereinhistoryhastheissuebeenmorevisible.3、进一步提出观点：。butthatisonlypartofthehistory.Anotherequallyimportantaspectis。

Aisbutoneofthemanyeffects.Anotheris。Besides,otherreasonsare。

4、提出假想例子的方式：Supposethat。Justimaginewhatwouldbelikeif。

Itisreasonabletoexpect。Itisnotsurprisingthat。

5、举普通例子：Forexample(instance),。。

suchasA,B,Candsoon(soforth)Agoodcaseinpointis。Aparticularexampleforthisis。

6、引用：Oneofthegreatestearlywriterssaid。Knowledgeispower,suchistheremardof。

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.Thatishow***ment(criticize/praise。).。

.Howoftenwehearsuchwordslikethere.7、讲故事（先说故事主体），thisstoryisnotrare.。

,suchdelimmaweoftenmeetindailylife.。,thestorystillhasarealisticsignificance.8、提出原因：Therearemanyreasonsfor。

（……的原因有很多）Why。.,foronething，。

（为什么……？其一，是因为……）Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.（这个问题牵涉到很多方面的因素）Anydiscussionaboutthisproblemwouldinevitablyinvolves。Thefirstreasoncanbeobiviouslyseen.Mostpeoplewouldagreethat。

Somepeoplemayneglectthatinfact。Otherssuggestthat。

Partoftheexplanationis。8、进行对比：TheadvantagesforAforoueighthedisadvantagesof。

AlthoughAenjoysadistinctadvantage。Indeed,AcarriesmuchweightthanBwhensthisconcerned.Amaybe。

,butitsuffersfromthedisadvantagethat。9、承上启下：Tounderstandthetruthof。

,itisalsoimportanttosee。Astudyof。

willmakethispointclear10、让步：Certainly,Bhasitsownadvantages,suchas。IdonotdenythatAhasitsownmerits.11、结尾：>Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat。

Insummary,itiswiser。Inshort。

5.哪位能帮我批改一篇初中英语作文,表达一定要地道一点哦1.Ifyoumissalesson,youmayhavesomequestionsleft（遗漏下问题）.youdbettersolvethembyyourself,thenyoucanmakeprogress!2.Weonlyrememberthatrightone.Themoreyouspeak,themoreyouwanttospeakandthebetteryouspeak.改为，trytoexpressyouselfinEnglish,themoreyouspeak,themoreyouwanttospeakandthebetteryouspeak.。

6.四级快到了Whenaskedaboutcollegestudentsshouldlivealoneorlivewithroommates,differentstudentswillhavedifferentpreferences.Somestudentschoosetolivealone,whileotherswouldratherlivewithroommates.（用while的时候尽量保持两个句子的时态一致，因为while有隐含的同时发生的意思，但这是个小问题）Thosestudentswhomaketheformerchoicebelieve（书面语中最好不要省略that，因为要引导句子）livingalonecanmakethemenjoymorepeaceandquiet.（没有错误但是有些拗口，can,make这样的动词范围太大，适当换成更为精致的动词）Besides,theyargue(that),undersuchpeacefulconditions,theycanfocustheirattentionontheirownstudyeasily,learning（与前后动词保持平行用learn）efficientlyandgainmoreknowledge.However,stillotherstudentschoosetolivewithroommates.Fromtheirperspectives,collegecareerincludesnotonlylearningbutalsohowtocopewithotherpeople.（英语讲求美的平行，notonly..butalso。

后面接平行的形式会使句子更为漂亮，如notonlyhowto。butalsohowto。）

Inaddition,they（这个代词指代得也太远了~直接用名词更好）holdthepointthatlivingwithroommatesisconvenientforthem（指代不清楚，有指代roommates的歧义）tomakefriendswitheachother.（用otherclas***ates更清晰）Astome,IaminclinedtolivewithroommatessinceIamnotgoodatfittinginwithotherpeersanddormlifemaybenefitme.Furthermore,IcangetimmediatehelpfromstudentsaroundmewhenIalonecannothandleamatter(alone放到句末).Giventhesefactors,IthinkI'dbetterlivewithroommates.很大的问题没有.如果是四级的话应该是还可以的吧.个人觉得代词用得太多，使得中间部分很模糊，说了那么多他们他们他们，谁知道指的是什么呢？能用名词的时候尽量用名词要显得清楚简洁得多.恩.。