英语作文的评语

导语：英语作文，是指用英语针对某一内容写出一篇文章，是英语考试最常见的一种题目类型，也是考生最容易失分的题型。下面是我为您整理的'英语作文的评语，供您参考和借鉴。

简单交待时间,地点和结果…

abriefintroductionofthetime,placeandresults...

语言简练,规范,开篇吸引人.

Conciselanguage,norms,beginstoattractpeople.

…以…开头,较有新意.前因后果娓娓道来.

...Inorderto...First,anew,Weiweidaolaiantecedentsandconsequences.

开篇简明扼要,精炼有序;重点描述…给人留下深刻印象.

Theopeningbeconciseandtothepoint,refiningorderly;keydescription...Veryimpressive.

以景喻情,开头颇有新意;倒叙开头,渲染意境.

Toviewthemetaphor,beginningquitenew;flashbackbeginning,renderingthemood.

开头直奔主题,也是一种写法.

Atthebeginningofstraighttothesubject,isalsoakindofway.

开头很活泼.拟人化手法的运用使开头显得活泼,

Beginningverylively.Personificationmakesbeginningislively,

反问句开头,吸引读者.

Askedatthebeginningofasentence,toattractreaders.

开头直奔主题,让人一目了然.

Atthebeginningofstraighttothesubject,letpeoplestickoutamile.

开头点题,用词很吸引人.

Atthebeginningofthetheme,withthewordisveryattractive.

场面和气氛描写为文章增色不少;

sceneandtheatmosphereforthedescriptionofgrace;

将…改成…更合适些,

Willbe...Changeinto...Somemoreappropriate,

自然承上启下,细节描写突出人物品质,令人感动.

Naturalbridge,detailsofoutstandingcharacter,moving.

叙事中夹写景,以已度人,将心比心.

Inhisnarrationclip,Yiyiduren,feelforothers.

拟人化语言使文章更显得生动活泼.

Anthropomorphiclanguagemakethearticlemoreappeartobelivelyandvivid.

外形描写十分有趣,突出了…的可爱.介绍中融入了自己的思想,有感染力.

…对精彩地方进行简单描述;点面结合

...Ontheexcitingplaceforasimpledescription;Dianmianjiege

简单介绍情况,自然过渡到下一段;

Briefintroductionofsituation,naturaltransitiontothenextparagraph;

情境描写调动起悬念;

Situationdescriptionarousesuspense;

充分运用语言,动作,心理描写,使事情具体,生动.

Makefulluseofthelanguage,action,psychologicaldescription,makesomethingspecific,vivid.

简要叙述前因,进行铺垫.

Briefdescriptionofantecedents,topavetheway.