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初三英语作文修改。

发表时间:2024-07-15 12:21:32 来源:网友投稿

WhenwewenttoSpringOuting,wesawsomeriversthathadbeenpolluted.Inthoserivers,manytrasheswerethrowed(这句怪怪的)(alargeamountofrubbishwasfloatingonrivers).Peopledon't(全篇时态要一致)thinkthrowingtrashescanpollutethewater.,andtheydon'tknowthatwaterisimportantforus.Ifwedidn'thaveenoughwater,wewoulddie.Peoplecanlivewithoutfood,buttheycouldn;tlivewithoutwater.Lostofwater(dirtywaterispouredintoriversbyfactories)isdirtyandsomefactoriesgiveittorivers(这句可不要).Asaresult,thewaterwassodirtythatwecan'tdrink.

Ithinkwatershouldbeprotected.Ifweprotectit,wecandrinkcleanerwater.It'simportantforustokeephealthy.

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