请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有语法错误！谢谢！

请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有语法错误！谢谢！Thisstoryremindsmeoneofmy【experiences】.Lastmonth,Ifailedin【an】exam,【insteadoflettingmyselfdown】,Ipaid【more】attentionto【thereasonsof】myfailure.【Ialwaysgetlessonsfromthosefailureexperiencesofmystudying.】【Atlast去掉】Finally,I【improvedmyselfandgotsuessful】【intheend.去掉】【Iquiteagreewiththewriter’sideabecauseIthinkwhathesaidarereasonable】.Failureiswhatoftenhappensinourlife.【Thebestwaytotreatitisfacingthemit】directlyinsteadofrunningawayfromthe【challenges】.Inmyopinion,【failure】canbevaluableandhelpfultoyou,becauseitcanhelpyouunderstandyourselfmoreclearly.Ifyoucanmakeuseofthelessonsfromfailure,andtryagainandagain,suesswilletoyousoonerorlater.Asthesayinggoes,“Failureisthemotherofsuess.”“Nopains,nogains.”最后一段建议所有第二人称改成第一人称希望回答对你有帮助

请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢Thisstoryremindsmeoneofmy【experiences】.Ihad【manydifficulties】inlearningEnglish【becauseIwasbornandraisedinChina土生土长的】,andwas【especiallypoor】inoralEnglish.【Myclas***atealwaysmakefunofmymistakes】.However,Inever【give】up.InsteadIkeptlisteningtothetapeandpracticingspeaking【English】wheneverIgotachance.AsIexpected,myEnglish【improved】quickly,tomysurprise,Ievengetan“A”intheoralEnglishexam.Inmyopinion,thoughlifecanbehard,weshouldn’teasily【giveup】whatwedo.Ifwemakeupourminds,andtryagainandagain,wewillfinallygetthesunshinewewant.Asthesayinggoes,“Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.Suessonlybelongstothosewhohavestrongwills.”希望回答对你有帮助

bee一般不用于进行时。第二段的theuseof，最好改为theusageof。你的作文很棒哦！呵呵

请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢1回答完毕，哈哈哈，加分

你只放个图上来，而不把作文打进来，心不诚哦。这样别人很难给你改。我把几个主要错误列在下面了。如果你想要更进一步的改正，就需要把全文打进来。另外你要练一下手写字型(能够把字母连写的)。你写的字虽然看着漂亮，但是写起来慢，读时不好认，两边都费劲。1.你只看了一个电影，要用单数amovie。2.Watchamovie是在家看电影，通常是在电视上看。现在也指线上看。到电影院看电影是seeamovie。我看你写的开头还以为你把朋友请到家里来了呢。3.讲故事的时候时态要一致，不要有时用过去时有时用现在时。whenwegettothecinema应该是whenwegottothecinema。4.电影院工作人员不是waitress，应该用theladyworkingthere。5.她说完话结尾你忘了加引号。6.adistanceway应该是adistanceaway。7.alwaysready应该是alwaysbeready，有情态动词should时不要忘了谓语动词。

请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢2AsfarasIamconcerned,【keepingpetsshouldbeforbidden】inthemunity.Thereasons【forthis】areasfollows.Firstly,【harmfulnoisemightbemadebyanimalswhich】will【disturbour】neighbors.Secondly,petsarelikelytogive【off[散发体味用giveoff]】bad***ell,whichpollutesthesurroundings.What'sworse,【sickpets】and【someaggressiveanimals】aredangeroustopeople.Thereisnodenyingthat【petssometimeshaveabadbehaviorofinjuringpeople】.Ithinkit'sthehightimeforustoputanendto【this】trend.Althoughkeepingpets【still】havemanyadvantages,thatisjustonesideof【the】coin.Ifweeacross【any】casementionedabove,atthattime,【Ithinkrulesshouldbemadetoregulatethepetsownersatonce.】Inaworld,【去掉now】【measures】havetobetakento【discourage】keepingpetsinthemunity.希望回答对你有帮助

请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢3AsfarasIamconcerned,toliveahealthylife,weshouldfirstpaymuchattentiontoabalanceddiet.【去掉aswearewhatweeat】.【Having】regular【exercises】and【getting】enoughsleepare【alsoimportanttoourhealthybodies.】Besides,stressisabsolutelyanenemyofourhealth,we【weneedtoknowwaystorelaxourselvesinheavyworkloads.[relax与所提及的stress是相对的解决方法，不要单纯简单地用getrid.]】【Inmypointofview,thewaymyclas***ateslivedisn’tahealthywayforustofollow.】Theyoftenhavesome【snacksduringbreaktime[课间用breaktime表示]】.What'sworse,they【alwaysbusy】in【studyingtillmidnight.】【Theyarelackingofsleepandphysicalexercises】.【Allaboveleadtotheirunhealthybodies.】Asaseniorstudent,Ithinkitis【not】important【but】necessaryforustoliveahealthylife.Soitisthehightimeforustosaynoto【those】unhealthywaysofliving.【去掉And】Iwishmyschoolmatescouldunderstandtheimportanceofgoodhealthandliveahealthylife【assoonaspossible】.希望回答对你有帮助，也可对比参照一下其他人观点

请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢w提出我的看法：1，第二行有两个the.重了，去掉一个2，第五行，someshortingsthatdisturbmealot.shorting后加s，为复数，后面disturbs去掉s3,developmyinterests前的to可去掉4，design?我觉得用setup更好5，togoandrelax中的goand去掉6，Theteacherswillfocusonteachingthestudents中的thestudents里的the去掉7，includingtheweekend这句多余，去掉8，个人认为第二段的结尾加上ifwesetupthiskindofschool比较好，这样可以与第二段的开头遥相呼应说真的，这篇文章总体感觉中式思维极强，我不敢有太大改动，只是按照你文章的思路进行“小改款”，呵呵呵祝君好运！

我写的英语作文请帮我看下有没有语法错误请帮忙改正谢谢1inourdormitorymaybehavesomecontroversy，有语法错误，把in去掉，把maybe改为may2wecanhaveagoodrestandputourheartintostudy个人认为把putinto改为concentrateone,mindon比较好还是尽量不用heartS吧3Ibeliveveitishightimethatwetooksomeeffectivemeasurestosolvethisproblem.在下认为这句用的很漂亮！4Abrightfutureiswaitingforuswhenallthemeasuresaretakenseriouslyimplementation.似乎后面应改为takenintoseriousimplemention