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检查英语作文

发表时间:2024-07-18 04:59:08 来源:网友投稿

你的作文错误之处(按顺序):

1

actor

->

actors

2

There

->

They

3

number->numbers

(复数)

4

时态错误:

改成

was

breaking

was

at

risk

wanted

to

and

talked...

(下面的动词原形出都应该用过去时态,因为发生于文章中的过去)

5

the

commander

of

Earth

->

the

commander

of

the

Earth

(地球要加不定冠词,下同)

6

on

earth

(究竟)->

on

the

earth

(在地球上)

7

is

the

richest...on

earth

可以简写:

is

the

richest

and

worst

man

on

the

earth

8

has

found

->

found(过去时)

9

the

Gog

->

Gog

(人名不用冠词)

10

angil

->

angry

11

why...did

->

why

did...do

12

Mars

->

the

Mars

13

after

talk

->

after

talking

14

isn't

succed

->

didn't

succeed

15

Gog

very

angry

->

Gog

was

very

angry

16

conclude

->

concluded

17

we

should

protect,protect...

->

we

should

protect,and

protect...

18

protection

of

->

take

protection

of

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