三道英语改错题

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问题描述:

以下3道改错题，每道题有4处错误。如何修改请大家指教。谢谢！

1.Theget-togetherwasdrawingneardaybyday.Ourclas***ateswhowereinchargeofitwerebusywiththepreparework.Thereservationofatableforeightpeopleintherestaurant,thefruitsfortheparty,thepresentforMr.Shi,thegameswecouldplay.Thepresent,weallagreedtobuyanelectricfanthehotweather.

2.Recruitmentofnewstudentslastedforthreeweeks.Thestudentswerefrom31provincesand.ItwasforthefirsttimethatUIBErecruitednewstudentsfromMacao.WheninterviewingthenewstudentfromMacao,thetallandslimgirlsaidthatshereceivedwarmwelewhenshecametotheuniversity.Shetoldmethatshefeltthecampuswasbigandbeautiful.WhenbeingaskedwhyshewasenrolledforauniversityinmainlandChina,sheansweredthatshewantedtobeindependentandlearnknowledgeoftradeandmanagement,UIBEwasfamousforthose.

3.ButtheplanwascancelledbyLiuyang,sayingthatshewasoldenoughtolivealone.“Tome,campuslifeismysteriousandchallengeable.Ilikemyroommate,really.Allofusefromdifferentpartwithdifferentthoughts,Ihavealreadylearnedalotfromothers.Besides,thediningroomisgood,andwewillhavenewdorminNovember.”

解析:

1.Theget-togetherwasdrawingnear(改为nearly)daybyday.Ourclas***ateswhowereinchargeofitwerebusywiththeprepare(改为preparatory)work.Thereservationofatableforeightpeopleintherestaurant,thefruits(改为fruit)fortheparty,thepresentforMr.Shi,thegameswecouldplay.Thepresent,weallagreedtobuyanelectricfan(加for)thehotweather.

2.(加上The)Recruitmentofnewstudentslastedforthreeweeks.Thestudentswerefrom31provincesand.ItwasforthefirsttimethatUIBErecruitednewstudentsfromMacao.WheninterviewingthenewstudentfromMacao,thetallandslimgirlsaidthatshereceivedwarmwelewhenshecametotheuniversity.Shetoldmethatshefeltthecampuswas（去掉was)bigandbeautiful.Whenbeingaskedwhyshewasenrolledforauniversityin(加上the)mainland(加上of)China,sheansweredthatshewantedtobeindependentandlearnknowledgeoftradeandmanagement,UIBEwasfamousforthose.

3.ButtheplanwascancelledbyLiuyang(改为LiuYang),sayingthatshewasoldenoughtolivealone.“Tome,campuslifeismysteriousandchallengeable.Ilikemyroommate,really.(Allofus把Allofus改为We)efromdifferentpartwithdifferentthoughts,Ihavealreadylearnedalotfromothers.Besides,thediningroomisgood,andwewillhavenewdorm(dorms)in(改为this)November.”