如何提高高三学生的英语写作能力
1.Handwritingisofgreatimportance.
在高考作文的评卷中,评卷老师的“感情分”是考生必须争取的。评卷老师对作文卷面的印象直接关系到考生作文得分的档次。因而在平时的书写中就要刻意加强书写方面的训练,以求书写工整清楚,字体美观大方。从第一印象去“征服”评卷老师。(附衡水中学学生作文)
Fromthemedia,wegotawarethattheearthquakeandrerribletsunamiaccompaniedhadcausedthousandsofpeopledeadandtensofthousandsofpeoplehomeless.
Onhearingtheshockingnews.myheartbrake.Immediately,yoursmilingfaceflashedinmymindandIrushedtothetelephonetodialyournumber,however,itcouldn'tgetthrough.HowIwishyouareallinsafety!
HowsimilarthesituationidwithwhatWenchuanfacedin2008!Toourdelight,Wenchuanhasbeenrecoveryingwithanoptimisticattitude.Ibelievethatwiththeinternationalhelp,youwillrebuildyourhomeandregainahappylife!
实战演练
Howiseverythinggoing?AsyouareinterestedintheChinesecustomsattable.IammorethangladtoexposeyoutothefantasticcultureofChina.
Generallyspeaking.Guestsareregardedasthecentreonsuchanoccasion.Asaconsequence.Thehostwillleadthegueststotheirseatsfirst.Besides,it'stheguestswhoaresupposedtotrythefirsttaste.What'smore,asisknown.ItistypicalofChinesetousechopsticksandweallareaccustomedtomakingnonoise.Lastbutnoeleast,apoliteguestneverforgerstoexpressthanksforthewarmtrear.Astheoldsayinggoes,doinRomeastheRomansdo.Whenyoupayavisit.Bearinmindtorespectthecustoms.
2.Goodbeginningandending.
大家都知道“Wellbegunishalfdone(良好的开端是成功的一半)”。高考书面表达属指导性写作,从历年的试题来看,都有一定的材料提示,而且有明确的字数限制。所以开头宜开门见山,直奔主题。同时要对你所写的第一个句子慎之又慎,确保不出任何错误,最好能作到引人入胜。另外文章能否得高分,结尾也很关键。好的结尾能起到画龙点睛的作用,也能使阅卷老师的眼睛为之一“亮”,这样的作文,高分非你末属。至于说怎样结尾,应根据不同体裁的文章而定,或总结全文,或表明对所写人物的态度,或适可而止,水到渠成。英语书面表达常见的开头形式大致有以下几种:
1).开门见山,揭示主题:文章一开头,,就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。例如下面是题为Honesty(谈诚实)一文中的开头:
Honestyisoneofthebestvirtues.Anhonestmanisalwaystrustedandrespected.Onthecontrary,onewhotellsliesisregardedasaliar,andislookeduponbyhonestpeople.
2).交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头:在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如ATriptoTaishan(去泰山旅游)的开头:
ThedaybeforeyesterdaymyclasswentonabustriptoTaishan.Thebusridetheretookthreehours.Thelongtripmadeusverytired,butthesightofthebeautifulsearefreshedus.
3).概括性的开头:即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“TheHappinessofReadingBooks”(读书的快乐)的开头:
Peopleoftensaythatgoldandsilverarethemostvaluablethingsintheworld.ButIsaythattoreadbooksismorevaluablethananythingelse,becausebooksgiveusknowledgeandknowledgegivesuspower.
3.Yourcompositionshouldbedividedintothreeorfourparagraphs.
注意篇章结构,合理布局
开始部分(openingparagraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分(Bodyparagraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分(concludingparagraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。
4.You’dbetterusesomelinkingwords,someadvancedwordsandvariedsentencepatterns.
▲Somebasicwritingskills:
1).句子要正确
改正下面的句子:
DoyouknowwhereisthePeople’sPark?
________________________________________________________?
Therearemanyvisitorsenjoythedish.
________________________________________________________.
Willyougivemeafavor?
______________________________________________?
Howdoyouthinkofthespeechmadebytheengineer?
________________________________________________________?
2).句子要平行
改写下面的句子:
Inmysparetime,Ienjoypopularmusicandcollectingstamps.
__________________________________________________________________
Ipreferthequietcountrysidetoliveinthenoisycities.
________________________________________________________________
3).句子要避免过多重复.
例如:Youwillcontinuetowalk.You’llseeahill.Youwillgoaroundthehill.You’llgettoalake.
→Walkingforawhile,you’llcometoahill,thenwalkroundtotheothersideofthehill.Thereyou’llseealake.
Heisaboy.Heishandsome.HeisfromHangzhou.
___________________________________________________________________
4).句子要避免汉语式英语
(1)Myspareloversareswimming,skating,collectingstampsandlisteningtopopularmusic.
→Inmysparetime,Ienjoyswimming,skating……
Inmysparetime,______________________________________________________________
Inmysparetime,______________________________________________________________
(2)Infact,theman’sageisveryyoung.
→Infact,_______________________________________________.
(3)MyworkistoobusyandIcan’tcome.
→__________________________________________________________________.
(4)Theoldwoman’slefteyeisblind.
→__________________________________________________________________.
▲Waysofwriting:
方法一:一句多译
例如:他们一到机场就受到了热烈的欢迎。
1)Assoonastheyarrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.
2)_______________hadtheyarrivedattheairport____________theywerewarmlywelcomed.
3)__________________hadtheyarrivedattheairport__________theywerewarmlywelcomed.
4)___________arrivingattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.
5)Theywerewarmlywelcomed______________________________theyarrivedattheairport.
方法二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
1).面对困难时,他从不放弃。
______________________________________________difficulties,henevergivesup.
2).引入市场后,该产品大获成功。
______________________________________________,theproductmadeagreatsuccess.
3).做完作业后,他回家了。
_______________________________________________,hereturnedhome.
方法三.使用丰富的句式
1)Ifailedintheexamagain.
WhatdisappointedmemostwasthatIfailedintheexamagain.
2)Hewaspoor,buthewashappy.
___________________________hewaspoor,hewashappy.
3).WealllikeourEnglishteacher.
WealllikeourEnglishteacher,whoisa__________________________________woman.
4).Allmyclassmatesworkveryhard.
Inorderto____________________________________,allmyclassmatesworkveryhard..
方法四:多用连接词
1).Thestudentsandteachersinourclasswereinvitedtotheparty.
_________________thestudents_________________theteacherswereinvitedtotheparty.
2).Shelearnsquickly,andsherememberswhatshehaslearnt.
Shelearnsquickly,_______________________,sherememberswhatshehaslearnt.
3).Childrenneedorganizedactivities,andtheyneedtimeandfreedomtorelax.
Ontheonehand,childrenneedorganizedactivities._________________________________,theyalsoneedtimeandfreedomtorelax.
总结
俗话说:不打无准备之仗。要想写好高考的书面表达,平时就要作好各方面的准备工作。在平时的学习中,要在以下几个方面多下功夫:
⑴加强语言基础知识的学习和训练。
①要有足够的词汇量;
②要掌握好英语的五种基本句型;
③要把握基本的语法知识,如:动词的时态和语态、主谓一致、非谓语动词的使用、形容词/副词的比较等级等等;
④熟悉习惯用语和习惯搭配;
⑤注意相似词语、易混词语的辨析。
⑵多背诵一些范文,多练笔。
多读一些国内外的优秀文章,乃至背诵一些范文,以拓宽思路,开阔视野,还能自觉杜绝中国式英语。
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