高考英语作文:2011北京高考英语作文范文情景作文

摘要：作文题目假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意

作文题目

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1．词数：100左右：

2．参考词汇：房租Tent(n.)

范文一：

DearBob,

Imveryhappytoreceiveyourletter,andImgladtohearthatyouwillgotoChinatolearnChinesehere.Ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.ItisonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyouthere,anditisonestopbeforetheChineseSchool.Theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms,oneofwhichisbedroom,theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.Thereareabed,asofa,adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallfiat,andtherentis500yuanpermonth.Maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwish,butIlltrymybesttomeetyourneeds.Ifitisnotsuitableenough,writetomeandIwilllookforanotherbetterplace.

Hopeyouwillcomeheresoon!

Allthebest!

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由：本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以which，引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。

范文二：

DearBob,

WelcometoChina!Youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou.

IhavefoundanapartmentonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorandthererethreeroomsinit:abedroom,akitchen,andabathroom.Thereisabed,asofa,adeskandachairinthebedroom.Thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth.

Alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.JusttaketheNo.11busatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast,willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive?ThenIUbeabletomeetyouattheairport,seeyou.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

范文三：

满分理由：本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。

DearBob,

Howareyouthesedays?

ImsogladtoknowthatyoullcometoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.NowIvefoundonewhichIthinkisprettygood.TheplaceisonFangCaoStreetwhichisneartheNo.11busstop.ItsjustonestopawayfromJianxinChineseSchool.

Therearethreerooms,akitchen,abathroomandabedroom.Thoughitisnotverybig,only25squaremetres,Ithinkitissuitable.Bytheway,therentis500yuanpermonth.Ihopeyoulllikeit.Ifnot,Illtrytofindanotherplaceforyou.

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由：本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

范文四：

DearBob,

ImsogladthatyouarecomingtolearnChinesehere.Ivealreadyfoundyouahousenearourschool.Idliketotellyousomethingaboutit.

YoumaygetonNo.llbusatFangCaoStreetandthenextstopisjustJianXinChineseSchool.Thehouseisneartheschool.Itisabout25squaremetres.Inthebedroom,thereisabed,asofastandingagainstthewallandatablenearthewindow.Youmayfindalightonthetableandachairnexttoit.Therearetwootherroomsconnectingthebedroom.Theleftoneisabathroomandtherightoneisakitchen.Soyoumaycookbyyourself.Therentforthehouseis500yuanpermonth.

Hopeyoullenjoystayinghere!

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由：本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。

范文五：

DearBob,

Imgladtohearfromyou.

Welcometoourcityinseptember.Ivefoundasuitablehouseforyou.

ThehouseisonFangCaoStreet,notfarfromtheJianxinChineseSchool.IfyoutaketheNo.11bus,itisjustonestop.

Itisaflatonthethirdfloorofabuilding.Ithasthreerooms,aliving-room,abathroomandakitchen.Youcancookyourself.Themirror,thebasinandthebathtubareveryconvenientforyou.Intheliving-room,thereisabed,asofaandadeskwithchair.Thedeskisnexttothewindow.Itwillbegoodforstudy.Thetotalsizeis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanamonth.

Willyoubesatisfiedwiththisflat,oryouwantanotherone?Justletmeknow.Illtrymybesttohelpyou.

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由：本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如suitablehouse、notfarfrom等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。

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