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thatletmefallinlovewithtravelling改成thatmademefallinlovewithtravelling
Icannotonlyenjoyvisitingmanywonderfulscenery改成Icannotonlyenjoyvisitingmanywonderfulsceneries.
AlsoImakesomanynewfriendsduringthejourney.改成AlsoIcanmakesomanynewfriendsduringthejourney.这样时态上才较为统一。
However,travellingiswonderful,buttheendofajourneyalwaysmakesmesad.改为Travellingiswonderful,buttheendofajourneyalwaysmakesmesad.即去掉However,因为它与but意思重复。
EverytimewhenIsaygoodbyetothefriendswhotravelwithme,改为EverytimewhenIsaygoodbyetothefriendswhotravelled/havetravelledwithme,时态不正确
Ican’tstoptocry改为Ican’tstopcrying意思是”禁不住落泪“
becausewehavesomanygoodtimetogetherandIdon’twanttobeapart.改为becausewehavehadsomanygoodtimetogetherandwedon’twanttobeapart.时态问题和人称问题。
travelaroundtheworldismydream改为travellingaroundtheworldismydream主语从句
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