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Itissaidthateveryhearthasitsownsorrow..yes,livingintheworld,wemustexperiencelotsoffrustrationsanddifficulties,whichareunforeseen,trafficaccident,floodwater,illness,etc.wecan’tpredictthatwhentheywillhappen...whenwehavedifficulties,wecanturntoothers,others'helparesoimportanttousthatIcan’timaginehowthelifewillbewithoutit.

Helpisneededineveryone’sdailylife.Oneday,Ihadastomachache,Ifeltterrible.mybestfriendlookedaftermecarefully.Nowordscanexpressmythankfulnesstoherforthehelp.Heofferedmeacupofhotwater,andtoldmetohavethemedicine.Inaddition,shealsocleanedtheclassroominsteadofme(thatday,Iwasonduty).

Allofabovetellusatruth——everyoneneedshelp.Doyouknowvolunteers,？theyareagroupofpeoplewhoalwayshelpotherswithoutexpectinganyrewards.Theydevotetheirwholelifetopeoplewhoneedhelp.Theyareheroeswhoareordinarypeoplebuthavenoble-mindedspirits,suchasthevolunteersofthe2008OlympicGames.Theygivehelpstothe2008OlympicGames,butasknothingtheyonlywanttomakeacontributiontoChina.theysetexamplesforustohelpothers.Ifsomeoneasksmethisquestion-----whoisthegreatestpersonintheworld,Iwillrepliedhimwithouthesitation----volunteers!

Myfriend’shelpmakesmemovedandletmegetoutoftrouble,andIthinkyourhelpwillmakemoreandmorepeoplefeelwarm,everyoneneedshelp,whydon’tusbeawarmheartedperson,Giveahelpinghandasavolunteersandmakeacontributiontoothers.let’screateabetterandnicertomorrowtogether.