雅思大作文结尾段的最优写法

一篇好的作文不仅要求有好的开头，还需要有好的结尾，这叫有始有终。但是很多人在雅思考试的时候因为时间的问题，结尾总是草草了事，这样的情况下怎么能够取得好的成绩。今天我们就为大家整理了雅思大作文结尾段的最优写法全解，一起来了解一下吧。

招式一：回答问题answerthequestion

E.g.1

Whenacountrydevelopsitstechnology;thetraditionalskillsandwaysoflifedieout.Itispointlesstotryandkeepthemalive.

Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?

Inconclusion,withoutsuggestingthatalltechnologyisnecessarilygood,Ithinkitisbynomeans‘pointless’,inanyway,totrytokeeptraditionsalivewithtechnology.Weshouldnotignoretechnology,becauseitcanbeourfriendandsupportourwayoflife.

这个结尾段落明确的提出了自己的观点，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。

招式二：不要添加新的信息notapplyanynewinformation

E.g.2

Happinessisconsideredtobeveryimportantinlife.

Whyisitdifficulttodefine?Whatfactorsareimportantinachievinghappiness?

Likeself-awareness,thisisalsoverydifficulttoachieve,butIthinkthesearethetwofactorsthatmaybethemostimportantforachievinghappiness.

用1句话明确自己的观点，幸福很难定义，可能有两个因素起到作用。

招式三：2-3个句子为宜2-3sentencesareenough

E.g.3

Somepeoplebelievethatchildren’sleisureactivitiesmustbeeducational;otherwisetheyareacompletewasteoftime.

Doyouagreeordisagree?

Finally,Ithinkitisalsoimportanttorememberthatchildrenneedtorelaxaswellaswork.Ifeverythingtheydomusthavesomeeducationaloracademicrelevance,thentheywillsoongettiredofstudyingaltogether,whichisthelastthingparentswouldwant.

2句话，作者的态度很明确，学生不可能花所有的时间去学习，否者就会完全失去对学习的兴趣，所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。

一般在结尾段的最开始部分，考生就应该给考官一个明确的信号词，让考官了解文章已经进入尾声了。这里所谓的信号词就是一些结尾段的套句：

信号词：Finally,tosumup,inconclusion,inbrief,therefore,thus,overall

句型：

1.itcanbeconcludedthat…

2.wecanfindthat…

3.Ithinkitisalsoimportanttorememberthat

4.themainpointistomakesurethat

5.Ibelievethat/Personally,Ithinkthat/Iwouldsaythat/Iagreethat/Myviewisthat

招式四：可采用的技巧

1.式【重述前文】

把在前文中的观点在结尾段进行重述，但是不能出现与开头段或者题目中的单词重复。

E.g.4

*Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehaviour.

Whatdoyouthinkarethecauseofthis?

Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?

Perhapsparentingclassesareneededtohelpthemtodothis,andhighqualitynurseryschoolscouldbeestablishedthatwouldsupportfamiliesmoreintermsofraisingthenextgeneration.Thegovernmentshouldfundthiskindofparentalsupport,becausethisisnolongeraproblemforindividualfamilies,butforsocietyasawhole.

把solutions进行的简单的再次描写--父母、好的托儿所、政府的资金扶助。

*Nowadaysweareproducingmoreandmorerubbish.Whydoyouthinkthisishappening?Whatcangovernmentsdotohelpreducetheamountofrubbishproduced?

Ithink,therefore,thatgovernmentsneedtoraisethisawarenessinthegeneralpublic.Childrencanbeeducatedaboutenvironmentalissuesatschool,butadultsneedtotakeaction.Governmentscanencouragesuchactionbyputtingtaxesonpackaging,suchasplasticbags,byprovidingrecyclingservicesandbyfininghouseholdsandshopsthatdonotattempttorecycletheirwaste.

重述上文的内容，由政府采取措施—提高意识【children&adult】

--具体措施【提高价格、循环利用、罚款】

2.两分式

把文章涉及到的主题人或者物分成两种，对其进行分别的说明。

E.g.5

*Inmanycountrieschildrenareengagedinsomekindofpaidwork.Somepeopleregardthisadcompletelywrong,whileothersconsideritasvaluableworkexperience,importantforlearningandtakingresponsibility.Whatareyouropinionsonthis?

Nevertheless,inbettereconomiccircumstances,fewparentswouldchoosetosendtheirchildrenouttofull-timepaidwork.Iflearningresponsibilitiesandworkexperienceareconsideredtobeimportant,thenchildrencanacquirethesebyhavinglight,part-timejobsorevendoingtaskssuchashelpingtheirparentsaroundthefamilyhome,whichareunpaid,butundoubtedlyofvalueinchildren'sdevelopment.

对于有钱的家庭而言，家长很少送小孩去做童工;如果是为了钱或者其他，可做兼职。

*Somepeopleprefertospendtheirlivesdoingthesamethingsandavoidingchange.Others,however,thinkthatchangeisalwaysagoodthing.

Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

Inconclusion,Iwouldsaythatchangecanbestimulatingandenergizingforindividualswhentheypursueitthemselves,butthatallchange,includingthatwhichisimposedonpeople,doesnotnecessarilyhavegoodoutcomes.

如果是人们自己的选择那么改变是一件好的事情，但如果是被强加于身，改变则不会带来任何可喜的效果。

3.折中式

很难判断

Inconclusion,Idonotthink其中到底谁占据主导地位，或者什么是最重要的，两者是缺一不可的，需共同存在。

E.g.6

Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.

Thateithernatureornurtureisthemajorinfluenceonaperson,butthatbothhavepowerfuleffects.Howthesefactorsinteractisstillunknowntodayandtheyremainlargelyunpredictableinaperson'slife.

两者是缺一不可的，天赋和后天培养同等重要。

4.转折对比式

提出另一种群体，与之相比，会产生什么效果来支持自己的观点。

E.g.7

Successfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealofmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessionals.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.

Personally,Ithinkthattheamountofmoneysuchsportsstarsmakeismorejustifiedthanthehugeearningsofmoviestars,butatthesametime,itindicatesthatoursocietyplacesmorevalueonsportthanonmoreessentialprofessionsandachievements.

把运动员与其他方面的工作人员进行对比—比上不足比下有余。