雅思作文：2012年6月雅思考试作文真题解析

2012年6月雅思写作真题解析WritingTaskOne

【题目】

表格题(Table)

据考生回忆此次考察的题目是1980年、2000年和2030年，在以上三个年份中，加拿大、英国和德国三国（inCanada,TheUKandGermany）65岁及以上（thoseaged65andover）人口所占的比例。(此题是旧题改造，将剑桥雅思5TEST2的线图改成了桌面图，遣词造句可以参考剑桥雅思提供的满分作文。)

【Tips】

针对此类题目，需提醒大家注意的是：仔细观察表格横行和纵列各自代表的意义，另外在bodyparagraph(s)写作的过程中，第一纵列内所列内容一个不能缺，具体如下：第一、开头introduction释义题目，变换题目words,phrasesandsentencestructure；第二、在写作bodyparagraph(s)时，注意相似数据描述以及大小数据比较论述；第三、conclusion段写作时，注意对bodyparagraph(s)数据客观解析部分进行总体趋势概述。

【句型】

1-Thetableshows...

2-ThefiguresforbothCanadaandGermanywerecomparativelylow.

3-TheUKsawanincreaseinthetotalnumberofpeopleaged65andover.

4-Canadawitnessedasimilartrend.

5-Itrepresentedanincreaseofmorethan10percent,comparedto5percentinGermanyand3percentintheUK.

6-Thefiguresin***doubledthatin***.

7-Canadahadalowerproportionofolderpeople.

8-Overall,itisclearthat...

【剑桥雅思5TEST2Task1】

【满分范文】

ThegraphshowstheincreaseintheageingpopulationinJapan,SwedenandtheUSA.Itindicatesthatthepercentageofelderlypeopleinallthreecountriesisexpectedtoincreasetoalmost25%oftherespectivepopulationsbytheyear2040.

In1940theproportionofpeopleaged65ormorestoodatonly5%inJapan,approximately7%inSwedenand9%intheUS.However,whilethefiguresfortheWesterncountriesgrewtoabout15%inaround1990,thefigureforJapandippedtoonly2.5%formuchofthisperiod,beforerisingtoalmost5%againatthepresenttime.

Inspiteofsomefluctuationintheexpectedpercentages,theproportionofolderpeoplewillprobablycontinuetoincreaseinthenexttwodecadesinthethreecountries.Amoredramaticriseispredictedbetween2030and2040inJapan,bywhichtimeitisthoughtthattheproportionofelderlypeoplewillbesimilarinthethreecountries.

WritingTask2

Somepeoplethinknewsisinnoconnectionwithpeople'slives;therefore,itisacompletewasteoftimetoreadthenewsinthenewspaperorwatchTVnews.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

【题目解析】

典型的因果类题目。前因后果类题目应该首先分析大前提newsisinnoconnectionwithpeople'slives是否成立；即使这个大前提成立，结论itisacompletewasteoftimetoreadthenewsinthenewspaperorwatchTVnews也未必成立。

【审题关键词】

1-news

2-innoconnectionwith

3-acompletewasteoftime

4-readthenewsinthenewspaper

5-watchTVnews

【写作语汇】

1-inculcateagreathabitlikereadinginsomeone

2-becomeapassionforsomeone

3-onesperseveranceofthistrend

4-themountingpressureofwork

5-keepsomeoneengrossed

6-introducesomeonetothedifferentculturesaroundtheglobe

7-giveyouaglimpseintootherculturesandplacesoftheworld

8-reduceboredom

9-breakthemonotonyofalazy,uncreativeandboringlife

10-exploreanewworldfilledwithinformationandingenuity

11-makeyourvisionblurry

12-forawidevarietyofreasons