帮我修改英语作文谢谢

Dearparents,thankyouforyourself-givinglove.(既然不是写给你父母的信这句话就没有必要了，或者改为Iwanttothankmyparentsfortheirself-givinglove.)Asthe(the去掉)timewent,Igrow（grew,过去式）upgentlyandleavr（left,leave的过去式）myhometownformakingaliving,sotheopporunitytocontactwith(with去掉，contact是及物动词)bothofthemislessandless.ButIalwaysbelievethaymyparentswilllovemeforever.

WhenIwasyoung,myhomeisexpecially（你是想用especially吧，不过这个词太中国话了，就改为very,如果是非常的穷就用extremely）poor.Somyfatherhave(had,has的过去式)tostayonastange（strange）landforearningbreadtooursfamily.(此处用一个不定式短语好一些，toearnbreadforourfamily)Andmymather(mother)raiseourtheerbrotherstomaturityself(妈妈把我们三个兄弟拉扯大，可以改为Wethreebrotherswerebroughtupbyourpoormother).

WhenIwasinthe(the去掉)higeschool,myparentsworkdedmorehard（hard的比较级是harder,不是morehard）andendeavorinordertogetmoremoneyaffordmetostudy..(这一句都改一下吧：WhenIwasinhighschool（根据你的上下文此处应该是juniorhighschool）,myparentsworkedevenharderinordertogetthemoneyformytuitionandfee.）although（Although）theyusuallyhave(had)togetupearlytoworkandlateoffwork,theyneverhave(had)anycomplain(complaint名词).onlyhope（Theironlyhopeis）thatIcanhaveagoodachievemnt(inthefuture.)

ThenIwenttothe(the去掉)seniorhigeschoolin(去掉in)whereIhave(had)todepartfrommyhometwontostudy,itismean(Itmeans或者Itismeantthat)myparentsmustto(to去掉)paymoremonney（money）formyschoolwork.

Threeyearslate(later),Iwenttothecollegeinthecityoffoshan(Foshan),itisallknow(known)thatthetuitionissodearthatagreatnumberofpeoplecann’tpayforitinchina.(Chinesecollegestudentscan'taffordforit)ButIneverforgotthewords,hardtolearntuitionisnotaproblem,myparentstellmewhenIwoundbeoffmyfamilytothecollege.(这一句想表达什么父母告诉我只管学习，不用考虑学费？)

Atpresent,Ihavegradutedfromthemedicalcollege,andtobeadoctor.（andIamadoctornow）Involuntarily,Iamlongingforgivingthemthemoneyeachmonth,however,mygage(wage)istoolowtosendanyfewof(fewof去掉)moneybackhome.Essentially（Principally）,Ioughttogobackhomeforthecompotationinthespringfestival,atlast,thatdays(duringSpringFestival)(but)Iwillbeonduty,(soIcan'tgobackhomethisyear).mydearparentsIhopebothofyourswilllbehealtheveryday.(IfeelsosorryformydearparentsandIcanonlysincerelyhopethattheyarehealthyeachday.)

Yourson.God,问题还不少，看在你的孝心的份上帮你修改了，看你也没几个财富值了，友情帮忙了，你的经历让我想起了我的过去共同加油吧未来会更好的是吧